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Due to a lack of ideas, I covered another one of :iconreptilecynrik:'s pieces, with his permission. Might lengthen it with my own melodies, later. View the original here:

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Sounds used:

OMI Universe of Sounds CD's
EWQLSO Gold
Prosonus Library
Fairlight Series III Factory Library
Waldorf PPG Wave 3.V

Original composition :iconreptilecynrik:

Cover :iconpythonblue:
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:iconreptilecynrik:
Critique by ReptileCynrik ReptileCynrik/critique/960990694">May 18, 2014, 7:31:17 AM
Interesting! ^__^

And it's totally cool to have an "art block" sometimes... I am VERY happy you chose some of my compositions, when getting out of ideas sometimes. I feel honoured and very happy!

So, I shall comment the remix of yours by listening to the song... step by step. :3

The beginning is almost identical to my version, hehehe... but that "screeching" (starting at 0:07 for the first time) is really great and scary.

The "hissing sound" of some metal cymbals (0:22) is stronger than any of my sounds - I love it!

And then the tension rises... in 0:29 we have some "anvil sound", which reminds me of "TERMINATOR" music. I would LOVE to have this sound, hehehehe... so, this version here is excellent!

The "gun shot styled" sound starting in 0:39 is a bit too synthetic and too strong for my taste... it's a overpowering the rest of the rather classical instrumentation a bit. I would lower the volume of this particular "bashing sound".

The orchestration itself is solid and plays along very well. And it's cool that you've erased my "Huaargh" voice in the end of the track... because I expected a choir in this case. You used some low percussion (timpani?) in the end, which does a fine job.
^_^

Of course, I would have to give you only 2 stars for "Originality", because it's a cover.
:-) But I'm sure it's just fair.


Overall, a nice little piece. THANKS for making it!!!!
*hugs*
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:iconcount-vilanova:
Count-Vilanova Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
Wow sounds like fun
Maybe add a small choir to some part of it ti keep the temp going if you feel like adding anything else~
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:iconpythonblue:
PythonBlue Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Student Artist
Thanks for the critique! Course, the composition is not mine: I just rearranged it.
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:iconcount-vilanova:
Count-Vilanova Featured By Owner May 25, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
True X3
Though I love what you did with it.
Ever play demon souls?
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:iconpythonblue:
PythonBlue Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Student Artist
Thanks! :)

I regret to say I have not.
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:iconcount-vilanova:
Count-Vilanova Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Professional Digital Artist
oh my XD
Look it up hahaha
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:iconnanaki-yamabushi:
Nanaki-Yamabushi Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
My My, This sounds really good.

Reminds me of one of Erdenstern adventure CDs.

Well I am not literated in music, so I can't say much more then it appeases me. Keep up the good work.

Atleast a dragon that does follow most furs in their House/trance/dance/techno crap music, but make real music.
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:iconpythonblue:
PythonBlue Featured By Owner May 19, 2014  Student Artist
Thank you very much for the comment! :) Deeply appreciated.
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:iconnanaki-yamabushi:
Nanaki-Yamabushi Featured By Owner May 21, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
oh just saw an error in my original comment. with does follow I mean doesn't follow -.-
How I only saw it now. This lion is getting old.
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:icondracophobos:
DracoPhobos Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Filmographer
Dark and cinematic
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:iconpythonblue:
PythonBlue Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Artist
Yep! :)
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:icondracophobos:
DracoPhobos Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Filmographer
I like
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:iconpythonblue:
PythonBlue Featured By Owner May 16, 2014  Student Artist
Great! :aww:
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:iconreptilecynrik:
ReptileCynrik Featured By Owner May 15, 2014
(copy paste from FURAFFINITY)

Interesting! ^__^

And it's totally cool to have an "art block" sometimes... I am VERY happy you chose some of my compositions, when getting out of ideas sometimes. I feel honoured and very happy!
:-)
So, I shall comment the remix of yours by listening to the song... step by step.  :3

The beginning is almost identical to my version, hehehe... but that "screeching" (starting at 0:07 for the first time) is really great and scary.
The "hissing sound" of some metal cymbals (0:22) is stronger than any of my sounds - I love it!
And then the tension rises... in 0:29 we have some "anvil sound", which reminds me of "TERMINATOR" music. I would LOVE to have this sound, hehehehe... so, this version here is excellent!
The "gun shot styled" sound starting in 0:39 is a bit too synthetic and too strong for my taste... it's a overpowering the rest of the rather classical instrumentation a bit. I would lower the volume of this particular "bashing sound".
The orchestration itself is solid and plays along very well. And it's cool that you've erased my "Huaargh" voice in the end of the track... because I expected a choir in this case. You used some low percussion (timpani?) in the end, which does a fine job.
^_^

Overall, a nice little piece. THANKS for making it!!!!
*hugs*
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:iconpythonblue:
PythonBlue Featured By Owner May 15, 2014  Student Artist
It's fine that you copied from FA. :giggle: Though, with the length of this comment, you could've submitted it as a critique. ;)

Thanks again! :D :huggle:
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:iconreptilecynrik:
ReptileCynrik Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Yeah, I guess I will.... I will re-submit it! :D
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:iconpythonblue:
PythonBlue Featured By Owner May 18, 2014  Student Artist
:aww:
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:iconreptilecynrik:
ReptileCynrik Featured By Owner May 18, 2014
Ok, done! ^__^
After all, a "critique" has more impact and value here.
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:iconduotheas:
DuoTheas Featured By Owner May 14, 2014
I still think its a cool sound for this
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